Bruce Springsteen, "The Boss"
Bruce Springsteen was born on twenty-fourth September in 1949. His hometown is Freehold a little village in New Jersey. When he was a teenager his guitar and he were the big troubles at home.
Springsteen played in little pubs near the coastline, the Stone Pony in Asbury Park was one of them. In his first album, “Greetings from Asbury Park”, he made a tribute from this place. This album and the second album were not successful at this moment, but when Springsteen recorded “Born to run”, in 1975, a lot of people discovered these two albums. The next albums made that Springsteen will be one of the most knowledgeable musicians in the world.
Moreover than music, Springsteen is a person with ideals and he never has broken this. An example is when Ronald Reagan offered him a lot of millions to use the song “Born in the USA” like his jingle in an election, and how Springsteen didn’t agree with this politician not allowing him to use this song. Another example was some years ago when he played against the war at Iraq war. Some people in USA critic him for this reason. I think that he don’t think about people opinion, he ever try to support that facts in that he believe.
In this moment, he also is one of the biggest musicians in the world, in the last tours more than 3 million of people have enjoyed with him.
posted by kayser_soze_ at 12:35 pm
3 Comments:
Here are some comments:
-This album and the second album not succeed (don't you think you need an auxiliary verb?)
-"knowledge" musicians. you write a nown when you need an adjective here. "knowledgeable"
-and never he has broken this... AND he also is one... (the position of the adverb is wrong! Have a look at the common mistakes list!!!)
-Ronald Reagan offered "he" (Not a subject but an objet pronoun!)
- an elections (singular or plural? You use one of each!)
-how Springsteen didn’t agree with this politician don’t allow use this song (maybe your do not know this one. Here you should say: how Springsteen didn’t agree with this politician not allowing him to use this song...
- the Iraq’s war (No possesive is allowed here!)
- "critic" this is a person, you need a verb
-this actions (singular or plural?)
-but he ever will done that he believe is good, no that people say it him that he must do.
(impossible sentences in English. Please, try to think and come up with something better!)
-more than 3 millions of persons has enjoyed with him. (A few problems in this sentence: 1. the plural of person is people 2. "millions" should be used as an adjective. 3. the verb with people should be plural.)
Think about all these and try to improve your text!!!
Hi kayser_soze_ at,
thanks for your comment.
Although I knew B. Springsteen was a person with strong ideals, I didn't know the curious topics you talk about this. It is nice to find a famous person not losing his/hers personality for money.
I have find your post very interesting.
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Hi kayser_soze!!
Thanks for your comment in my blog.
You have posted an interesting composition in your blog. I didn't know these curious things about Bruce S.
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